Bespoke Services

  • Feature script notes session - £100

    For feature films, full plays, TV pilots & audio dramas.
    - Initial 30 min meeting to discuss your aims for the script, why you wanted to write it and where you feel stuck.
    - A close read of the current draft.
    - 1 hour meeting discussing the strengths of the script and where it needs to develop against your aims and wider dramaturgical conventions.
    - Written document of my feedback, notes on our discussion and a step by step plan for redrafting.

  • Short script notes session - £50

    For short films, one act plays & short audio dramas.
    - Initial 30 min meeting to discuss your aims for the script, why you wanted to write it and where you feel stuck.
    - A close read of the current draft.
    - 1 hour meeting discussing the strengths of the script and where it needs to develop against your aims and wider dramaturgical conventions.
    - Written document of my feedback, notes on our discussion and a step by step plan for redrafting.

  • Bespoke workshops

    Bespoke workshop for your group on a range of aspects of dramatic writing, which can include:
    - Ideas generation
    - Character development
    - Structure & Paradigms
    - Redrafting
    - Journey of script from idea to screen

Testimonials

  • "Holly’s reading and note giving is a great help as she is sharp, honest and very warm - she will find any holes in the structure or inconsistencies in character right away and give valuable advice on them but is very gentle in how she words them. I find her notes invaluable."

    Jun, Screenwriter

  • "Holly has offered considered and consistent feedback on all the work I've shared with her. As well as providing excellent, practical notes, she's a brilliant social barometer, picking up tonal issues that never occurred to me. As a fellow writer, she also understands what it's like to have your work critiqued, so her feedback always feels thoughtful and necessary."

    Matt, Writer/Producer

  • "Holly is an exceptional constructive critic with a wonderful enthusiasm for creativity. She's well read and has a great grasp of the discipline of writing for stage, page, and screen, so her feedback is incredibly valuable - I always share any pieces with her first and foremost as I know she'll bring a fresh perspective that will help me sharpen my work and keep it flowing in the right direction."

    Amy, Content Writer

  • "Holly's feedback has been fundamental to my script development; her perspective is always challenging and thought-provoking. I always feel that Holly is focused on my style and the story I want to tell, and I trust her whole-heartedly with my work."

    Millie, Screenwriter/Playwright

  • "Holly has a superb understanding of story and structure, and always delivers intelligent, constructive notes which leave you feeling inspired for the next draft!"

    Katherine, Writer/Director/Producer